Oh goodness gracious, this may be one of the most beautiful fics I have ever read for any fandom, any OTP. I just... I am in awe of it. It's hard to explain just how beautifully you've capture this couple. The beautiful thing is, there's this complete sense of intimacy between them when reading... the little things like her boxer shorts and the toothpaste stain and how familiar they are with each other and each other's moves~, but there's still that passion, that passion that takes your breath away. And the way you've written Sam, the way you've written him watching her, it's... you can just feel how in love with her he is, how in awe of her he is... honestly, Sam Swarek. The way he is so completely in love with her sort of hurts my heart and takes my breath away. I CAN'T EVEN.
And I love how you don't have him completely "oh yes, let's have a baby!" because you do allow for that panic to set in, and that's normal! I mean, he is a guy haha. And the swearing is perfect. But his thoughts always come back to Andy, and that's what's so beautiful to me.
(McNally, she—sometimes you really have to spell things out. It took Sam three tries to propose) asjdfaposjdfopasd Omg I am sorry but that is the cutest thing ever. I can't even, like... askjdfpoajsfdopajfa. I can just imagine her NOT getting it and him having to try and re-word the question and her being adorable and awkward and clueless and him having to blurt it out and please can you write the fic. CUTEST.
"A while," Sam mutters, lips curving against her temple. A while for Andy can be anywhere from thirty seconds to fifteen years, although if Sam had to make an educated guess he'd probably put this at someplace in the middle. "Okay." This is so lovely. I love how with this, you have them talking about SUCH a big important topic but thing is, not much needs to be said. Because Sam knows her so well, and he knows what she's saying even when she's not saying anything. It just shows how she's managed to let him in to her heart, how he's broken down her walls, and they've truly just... they're just so perfect.
Andy wiggles under his stare. "Sa-am," she laughs, "this is not getting me pregnant." I LOLed.
The comment about the scars on her knees... oh my heart. And his pregnancy kink LOL LOVE IT. I love the teasing even with the intimacy and the sexy moves because it shows how comfortable they are with each other, how well they know each other, how they can stop and tease each other but still be secure about what they're doing. This fic, I love it so much, thank you for it. I beg that you write more and more and more because I can't stop thinking of these two!!! :) Bravo.
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And I love how you don't have him completely "oh yes, let's have a baby!" because you do allow for that panic to set in, and that's normal! I mean, he is a guy haha. And the swearing is perfect. But his thoughts always come back to Andy, and that's what's so beautiful to me.
(McNally, she—sometimes you really have to spell things out. It took Sam three tries to propose)
asjdfaposjdfopasd Omg I am sorry but that is the cutest thing ever. I can't even, like... askjdfpoajsfdopajfa. I can just imagine her NOT getting it and him having to try and re-word the question and her being adorable and awkward and clueless and him having to blurt it out and please can you write the fic. CUTEST.
"A while," Sam mutters, lips curving against her temple. A while for Andy can be anywhere from thirty seconds to fifteen years, although if Sam had to make an educated guess he'd probably put this at someplace in the middle. "Okay."
This is so lovely. I love how with this, you have them talking about SUCH a big important topic but thing is, not much needs to be said. Because Sam knows her so well, and he knows what she's saying even when she's not saying anything. It just shows how she's managed to let him in to her heart, how he's broken down her walls, and they've truly just... they're just so perfect.
Andy wiggles under his stare. "Sa-am," she laughs, "this is not getting me pregnant."
I LOLed.
The comment about the scars on her knees... oh my heart. And his pregnancy kink LOL LOVE IT. I love the teasing even with the intimacy and the sexy moves because it shows how comfortable they are with each other, how well they know each other, how they can stop and tease each other but still be secure about what they're doing. This fic, I love it so much, thank you for it. I beg that you write more and more and more because I can't stop thinking of these two!!! :) Bravo.