ext_31819 ([identity profile] stop-theworld.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] threeguesses 2008-06-15 12:24 am (UTC)

This is gorgeous and heartbreaking. You pin their characters down so well, and manage to realistically give their future a taste of the normal, at least for a little while.

I love these lines best: She does not want to die anywhere she can't hold his hand. and She stays where he can find her. Wow.

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