Date: 2009-12-24 06:36 am (UTC)
This was very fun. I loved the "Don't (And you will)s" throughout the story.

Oh, and this descriptive: "the willow basket of her ribs"? Absolutely amazing. Really draws the reader's sense of touch into it.

Well done!
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