So I'm pretty sure I love your Will and the way you write the Will/Kalinda bromance. Particularly favorite lines were
He’s is pretty sure this is tensest threesome in the history of the world.
Poor, poor Will!
“Not too much,” Kalinda murmurs and he seriously, seriously wants to hit her.
I laughed out loud when I read this. Kalinda WOULD be the one to say it.
“Are you seriously giving me a pep talk?” Will asks, incredulous.
BWAH. Worst. Pep. Talk. Ever. Kalinda, you're fired. (Although: no, Will I don't think the pep talk was actually directed at you.)
Will wags a silent finger at her. She makes a face, settles her head on the pillow.
Heart! Only Will could make her stay.
“Got your back,” her murmurs in her ear.
“Literally?” Kalinda bites off. Will smiles, slides a hand underneath the silk to cup her.
Somehow I find this SUPER hot. I'm torn between feeling bad for Will and thinking that he doesn't have it so bad!
And I find myself empathizing with Will: Alicia is freaking TERRIFYING in this fic. I'm glad she softens toward Kalinda, because the beginning is just...uncomfortable and painful and terrible and you know that poor Kalinda must be dying inside. But that kiss is GORGEOUS, Alicia going stock-still (the way Kalinda's been all night) and then the dam breaking...perfect. I can totally see things going down (ha, no pun intended) like this. So perfect!
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Date: 2011-06-01 11:56 pm (UTC)He’s is pretty sure this is tensest threesome in the history of the world.
Poor, poor Will!
“Not too much,” Kalinda murmurs and he seriously, seriously wants to hit her.
I laughed out loud when I read this. Kalinda WOULD be the one to say it.
“Are you seriously giving me a pep talk?” Will asks, incredulous.
BWAH. Worst. Pep. Talk. Ever. Kalinda, you're fired. (Although: no, Will I don't think the pep talk was actually directed at you.)
Will wags a silent finger at her. She makes a face, settles her head on the pillow.
Heart! Only Will could make her stay.
“Got your back,” her murmurs in her ear.
“Literally?” Kalinda bites off. Will smiles, slides a hand underneath the silk to cup her.
Somehow I find this SUPER hot. I'm torn between feeling bad for Will and thinking that he doesn't have it so bad!
And I find myself empathizing with Will: Alicia is freaking TERRIFYING in this fic. I'm glad she softens toward Kalinda, because the beginning is just...uncomfortable and painful and terrible and you know that poor Kalinda must be dying inside. But that kiss is GORGEOUS, Alicia going stock-still (the way Kalinda's been all night) and then the dam breaking...perfect. I can totally see things going down (ha, no pun intended) like this. So perfect!